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[同人衍生] 【琼明神女录之陆嘉静试道台】(1)万字纯肉

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太让人惊艳的文笔与题材了!

剑大的文风到欲戏一向喜欢抽象描写,看剑大的文章总是会有一种欲求不满的感觉,尤其现在在大平台发文了,情欲戏码更加是点到即止,本篇作者大大直白的描写刚好能让读者大快朵颐!

上半篇陆嘉静在台上脱得全身赤裸任人观看的描写极度唯美,太赞了。

美中不足是下半篇的破处戏,陆嘉静的表现反差太大,彻底跟前面的仙子感判若两人,这部分让人有点出戏,而且结尾比较匆忙,没有好好写完事后如何收场回到故事主线,这部分其实也可以很有发挥空间,不是非得啪啪啪才精彩。

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